Editor’s
dilemma is in determining the length of a sentence and extent of elaboration of
any idea.
When I saw this
post about the problems faced by editors I was travelling with very low battery
but noted that I must debate on this issue.
Editing is
important, some cases inevitable too and in certain cases renders a work more
interesting through fine tuning and chaffing of the unnecessary frills covering
the important substance or subject.
But how much is
too much and who gets the privilege of deciding that.
Whether editing
must be used as a nail filer or as a vegetable or fruit skin peeler or as a
surgical knife or as a lumber jack to fine tune a presentation.
All artists in
all forms of art create or render their works as a flow of their creative
expression involving the romance between the medium with all its techniques and
tools and what the artist wants to express using them.
We can see this
romance in alapana [elaboration in music], a painter splashing multiple colors
, a photographer taking photos from various angles, a writer weaving multiple
expressions to express ideas, thoughts, descriptions and so on.
Every phrase in
an alapana, every line or colour in a painting, every expression in writing, even
the redundant ones or synonyms may have popped out of certain nuances that must
have struck a chord in the mind of the artist/writer.
That’s why
editing is a very delicate job like tight rope walking- the emphasis of focus
is on balance than on exuberance or exhibition and ultimate aim is to ensure
that final output is enjoyable or useful to the intended recipient.
When I see a
movie like PINK PANTHER I am in total admiration of the editor; when I see
Sivaji Ganesan’s over acting I feel that both the director and editor have
failed miserably; when I see excessive, unwarranted, repetitive long winded dialogues
in Indian movies it is irritating.
However, when
Semmangudi elaborates a raga in alapana or a Madurai Mani Iyer repeats certain
kalpana swaras, when J.Krishnamurthy or Osho repeat certain intrinsically
valuable philosophical truths in different ways , when Shakespeare’s or
Kalidasa’s plays delve into multiple descriptions I would love to savor them in
all their entirety as many times as I can.
Life after all is
a collation of repetitions. Repetitions of various kinds and intensities and
which could be categorized as inevitable, interesting and incorrigible.
As in many
other realms of life, editing and determining the length of a sentence too, our
attitude is, inevitably one that is ambivalent.
Here is what I
wrote on three topics of remote relevance to the subject of discussion
1. Length of a
sentence
2. Need for
elaboration
3. Repetition-
the predominant factor of life
Once I had an
argument with an editor, I told her , well I thought writing a cheque in your
name for hundred thousand rupees i.e. 100,000 but then I edited and removed the
four zeros which I felt were a mere repetition.
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